Lusia and Sponge
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I guess I will go with the 5th one
It is my favorite as well 
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Ok made some progress
Linework + values. I feel like I can push it more with the plants and stuff, but I am afraid I will make a huge mess from that. So, for now, that is what I have... any comment before I move onto color?
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I played with it a bit, how do you feel about this: I decreased the value of the tree on the left and increased one in the middle, so the contrast between light character and a dark tree is bigger. Also how about more diagonal grass embarkment, for increased interest? Btw you lineart is amazing, I love it, can't wait to see more
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@Ailantan Thanks for suggestions. Yes adding more contrast between the character and the tree is probably needed. With the grass, I would like to keep it real low and passive, but It suggests me that it needs more interest so I will play with that! Thank you!
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@Jonas-Zavacky Looking good! I did a quick cut and paste of my thoughts too - my only thought was that moving her to one side of the composition would help balance the image and possibly give you the opportunity to do a longer stretch of the interesting lighting you are doing between the trees in front of her - i went a bit far with the light in my quick cut and paste but it shows the idea - just a thought though
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@Kevin-Longueil I am on the fence right now. I kinda like the composition what I have right now, but I am not 100% convinced with it and your take on it is definitely interesting (a lot) but I am not sure if it helps to convey the feel what I want from it. anyway, thanks for the suggestion.
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alright, I think I'm done with this. Realized that I still really don't understand a whole lot about rendering hehe
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@Jonas-Zavacky Looks fantastic. Nice work.
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thank you @evilrobot
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@Jonas-Zavacky It is sweet seeing you process with these. Looking great and keep posting.
-The Prairie Fox
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@theprairiefox your comment is sweet
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@Jonas-Zavacky this is nice. Whether you go with any of @Kevin-Longueil suggestions or not I think decreasing the brightness in the light beam that is behind them (on the right) will help the focus on where they are headed.
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@burvantill Thank you! Yeah, you are right. That part is kinda stealing my attention
