Lusia and Sponge

[Jonas Zavacky]

@Ailantan Thanks for suggestions. Yes adding more contrast between the character and the tree is probably needed. With the grass, I would like to keep it real low and passive, but It suggests me that it needs more interest so I will play with that! Thank you!

[Kevin Longueil]

@Jonas-Zavacky Looking good! I did a quick cut and paste of my thoughts too - my only thought was that moving her to one side of the composition would help balance the image and possibly give you the opportunity to do a longer stretch of the interesting lighting you are doing between the trees in front of her - i went a bit far with the light in my quick cut and paste but it shows the idea - just a thought though

[Jonas Zavacky]

@Kevin-Longueil I am on the fence right now. I kinda like the composition what I have right now, but I am not 100% convinced with it and your take on it is definitely interesting (a lot) but I am not sure if it helps to convey the feel what I want from it. anyway, thanks for the suggestion.

[Jonas Zavacky]

alright, I think I'm done with this. Realized that I still really don't understand a whole lot about rendering hehe

[evilrobot]

@Jonas-Zavacky Looks fantastic. Nice work.

[Jonas Zavacky]

thank you @evilrobot

[theprairiefox]

@Jonas-Zavacky It is sweet seeing you process with these. Looking great and keep posting.

[Jonas Zavacky]

@theprairiefox your comment is sweet Thank you

[burvantill]

@Jonas-Zavacky this is nice. Whether you go with any of @Kevin-Longueil suggestions or not I think decreasing the brightness in the light beam that is behind them (on the right) will help the focus on where they are headed.

[Jonas Zavacky]

@burvantill Thank you! Yeah, you are right. That part is kinda stealing my attention