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    • burvantill
      burvantill Moderator last edited by burvantill

      Weak and Strong
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      My Weak looks like a broken Stingray. Lol

      Lisa Burvant
      www.lisaburvant.com
      Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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      • ArtofAleksey
        ArtofAleksey @burvantill last edited by

        @burvantill yeah i think redrawing the weak car in the same confidence you did the strong one would make it easier for you to see things that are and arent working.

        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
        alekseyillustration.com

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        • burvantill
          burvantill Moderator last edited by

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          I redid my Weak car... better @ArtofAleksey? 😬

          Lisa Burvant
          www.lisaburvant.com
          Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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          • ArtofAleksey
            ArtofAleksey @burvantill last edited by

            @burvantill yes! Flat tires are a nice touch

            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
            alekseyillustration.com

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            • Coley
              Coley @burvantill last edited by

              @burvantill flat tires. What a stroke of genius! Very cool

              https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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              • NicolaSchofield
                NicolaSchofield last edited by NicolaSchofield

                I decided I’m going to include a vehicle in my entry for the March contest so it’s a good time to do the vehicle design course! Here are my caricatures for the first assignment. I feel maybe I could have pushed them a bit further so will try to keep that in mind as I move on to the stance part of the first assignment.

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                Nicola Schofield

                Twitter: twitter.com/NSchofieldArt
                Instagram: instagram.com/NicolaSchofieldArt/

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                • shanehunt
                  shanehunt @burvantill last edited by

                  @burvantill I agree about the flat tires. Great idea. It looks like your image might be a bit too small judging by the texture and line quality. I would consider doing slightly larger drawings for the future assignments and focusing on craftsmanship and tightness. Looking forward to more from you!

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                  • shanehunt
                    shanehunt @NicolaSchofield last edited by

                    @neschof Excellent work! I’m impressed at the wide variation in proportions. And very nice line quality. Keep it up.

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                    • ArtofAleksey
                      ArtofAleksey @NicolaSchofield last edited by

                      @neschof nice variation, I love the stubby car

                      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                      alekseyillustration.com

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                      • burvantill
                        burvantill Moderator @shanehunt last edited by

                        @shanehunt Thankyou for the suggestion. I’ve been drawing these in my sketchbook (vertical format). I will start using the full page from now on. 🙂

                        Lisa Burvant
                        www.lisaburvant.com
                        Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                        • NicolaSchofield
                          NicolaSchofield last edited by

                          Next part of the assignment - stance. I found this really hard but also quite fun. I had a vague idea of a scared & cringing creature for weak, I was trying for sort of hunched "shoulders", and being pushed forward but not wanting to go. For strong I was thinking of the puffed up superhero stance with chin up and chest out. It ended up more subtle than I thought.

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                          Nicola Schofield

                          Twitter: twitter.com/NSchofieldArt
                          Instagram: instagram.com/NicolaSchofieldArt/

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                          • NicolaSchofield
                            NicolaSchofield @shanehunt last edited by

                            @shanehunt thank you! I’m finding the course fun and super useful / interesting 🙂

                            @ArtofAleksey thanks, I think stubby one kinda looks like a normal(ish) mini 🚗

                            Nicola Schofield

                            Twitter: twitter.com/NSchofieldArt
                            Instagram: instagram.com/NicolaSchofieldArt/

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                            • NicolaSchofield
                              NicolaSchofield @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                              @ArtofAleksey just seen your strong stance - he's so perky and cute! 🥰

                              Nicola Schofield

                              Twitter: twitter.com/NSchofieldArt
                              Instagram: instagram.com/NicolaSchofieldArt/

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                              • ArtofAleksey
                                ArtofAleksey @NicolaSchofield last edited by

                                @neschof thanks!

                                I like your weak stance it sorta looks terrified. Although your strong stance looks very close to the “normal” one you did

                                instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                alekseyillustration.com

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                                • burvantill
                                  burvantill Moderator last edited by

                                  Assignment 1 Part 3
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                                  What I see: The pontoon on the port side seems wrong. I think it should be slightly bigger even though my perspective lines lineup, it’s closer so it should be a little bit bigger. It looks weird like this. And the starboard tail wing is too long.
                                  I think my ship is OK except for the tangent of the horizon line and the bottom of the hull. Lol

                                  What do you see?🙂

                                  Lisa Burvant
                                  www.lisaburvant.com
                                  Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                                  • NicolaSchofield
                                    NicolaSchofield @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                    @ArtofAleksey yeah, it is only subtly different. How about this? I’ve tweaked him a bit to bulk/puff him up and lean forward a little.

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                                    Nicola Schofield

                                    Twitter: twitter.com/NSchofieldArt
                                    Instagram: instagram.com/NicolaSchofieldArt/

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                                    • NicolaSchofield
                                      NicolaSchofield @burvantill last edited by

                                      @burvantill I’m going to give this a go now. I think you’ve done a good job - It looks quite complicated!

                                      Nicola Schofield

                                      Twitter: twitter.com/NSchofieldArt
                                      Instagram: instagram.com/NicolaSchofieldArt/

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                                      • burvantill
                                        burvantill Moderator last edited by

                                        Here are my vehicles for Assignment 2. My character is Wile E. Coyote and these are vehicles that he would use to try and chase down the Road Runner.
                                        Wild1.jpg Wild2.jpg Wild3.jpg Wild4.jpg

                                        Lisa Burvant
                                        www.lisaburvant.com
                                        Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                                        • Heather Boyd
                                          Heather Boyd @burvantill last edited by Heather Boyd

                                          @burvantill these look great! -low form high function is my favorite.

                                          Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
                                          Website: https://heatherboydillustration.ca
                                          Shop: https://www.inprnt.com/search/products?q=HeatherBoydIllustration
                                          Ko-Fi: https://ko-fi.com/heatherboydillustration

                                          Be blessed,

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                                          • NicolaSchofield
                                            NicolaSchofield @burvantill last edited by

                                            @burvantill really nice ideas and also lovely drawings. My favourite is the second, I feel like low function machines are kinda Wile E Coyote's thing 😁

                                            I chose Winnie the Pooh but I'm struggling with it so might change my mind!

                                            Nicola Schofield

                                            Twitter: twitter.com/NSchofieldArt
                                            Instagram: instagram.com/NicolaSchofieldArt/

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