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    • Tiffany Thomas
      Tiffany Thomas last edited by

      WOW!!!!!!! Soooo amazing, love all the detail!!!!

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      • avfarrar
        avfarrar @lizardillo last edited by

        @lizardillo wow! I really love your design here!!

        There is beauty in life!

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        www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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        • KevinTreaccar
          KevinTreaccar last edited by

          I think the chimneys are working. Just like the whole rest of the thing.

          kevintreaccar.com
          instagram.com/kevintreaccar

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          • Valerie Light
            Valerie Light last edited by

            This is completely charming. I really like your line work here, and I love seeing how you worked through silhouettes and roughs to get to this point.

            I like the 2 little chimneys at the top- lots of busy, angled, active things to look at. My one comment is that the attachment of the structure to the branch above looks a little awkward, mainly because the top curve of the structure and the lower right part of the branch share a tangent that makes the branch seem squeezed.

            www.valerielightillustration.com
            www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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            • lizardillo
              lizardillo last edited by

              Hi All,

              Thanks for the feedback. I have drawn back over with a thinner brush to try and keep the detail crisper.

              @Kevintreaccar I actually deleted the chimneys before seeing this but I have added them back in as chimney 'flower' pots. @Valerie-Light I have had a look at the branch connection again and gone back to a string loop to give a bit of space between the branch. Thanks for pointing this out. Hope this looks a little better.

              Thanks again everyone. It's a race to colour it now but I have really enjoyed this (eventually - after all of the frustrated revisions 😂 ). The wooden cross beams will go on last, they may be a bit too much.

              Looking forward to having a good look through the prompt thread later and seeing everyone's entries.

              Bee_Inn_Lines.png

              Website: lizardillo.co.uk
              IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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              • Georgios Christopoulos
                Georgios Christopoulos @lizardillo last edited by

                @lizardillo I don't know how the colours will go, but I am Pretty sure this will be a winning piece. Congrats in advance!

                Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/g.chris.artwork/
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                • lizardillo
                  lizardillo @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by lizardillo

                  @Georgios-Christopoulos thank you. I’m not sure if I’ve put too much on here to be honest, but I’ve enjoyed myself creating it. I love yours too. That shark on the top of the lighthouse has such a great expression.

                  Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                  IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                  • lizardillo
                    lizardillo last edited by

                    The finished article. Thanks for your feedback all, it's really appreciated.

                    Inn_April21-LizOrton.jpg

                    Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                    IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                    • lizardillo
                      lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

                      I hope you don't mind but I just wanted to say thank you so much for all of the feedback, support and encouragement. For someone just finding their feet and trying to start a career in something she's always loved, it really means a lot.⁠ I've popped this on instagram but I just wanted to say it in person here.

                      As someone not sure if how to approach potential clients I have found working to live briefs so useful and seeing everyone else's approach to the same brief is so great. I had not realised how wonderful it is to be part of a supportive and talented community who help and learn from each other.

                      I would really love to be able to have all three prompts to put up on my portfolio site (when I rework it) so I can be one step closer to plucking up the to courage to pitch for some paid work in this new direction I am trying to go in. I have never drawn a full environment before so I may ask for a little help with this month's prompt if that is ok. I will try to help others as much as I can but I am always a little nervous about posting a comment. I'm a bit of a British introvert sorry.

                      Drinks are on me in the Buzz Inn!! 🍺 🐝⁠

                      CHEERS!! 🍻

                      ::EDIT:: As Kevin has pointed out, he does look like he's drinking beer. Please be assured he is giving you a pint of non-alcoholic nectar. I should have thought about that 😃 #rookieerror

                      Cheers_lizardillo_insta.png

                      Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                      IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                      • KevinTreaccar
                        KevinTreaccar @lizardillo last edited by

                        @lizardillo Ummmm, is your “young traveler” old enough for that drink?

                        kevintreaccar.com
                        instagram.com/kevintreaccar

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                        • lizardillo
                          lizardillo @KevinTreaccar last edited by lizardillo

                          @Kevin-Treaccar It's nectar as it has no alcohol. 😂

                          Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                          IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                          • ajillustrates
                            ajillustrates @lizardillo last edited by

                            @lizardillo I was so happy that the Buzz Inn got the win; it's an incredible design and beautiful piece! Looking forward to your May illustration, and crossing my fingers for you to secure the hat-trick.

                            https://ajillustrates.com
                            https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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                            • Janette
                              Janette last edited by

                              Your process and final piece was a joy to see! Love, love, love the little details and humour in this. Outstanding.

                              Art is hard.
                              https://www.instagram.com/janettehillart/

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                              • lizardillo
                                lizardillo @KevinTreaccar last edited by

                                @Kevin-Treaccar I've updated the post. Thanks for pointing that out, I should have put some flowers on the glass. Oops 😃

                                Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                                IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                                • KevinTreaccar
                                  KevinTreaccar @lizardillo last edited by

                                  @lizardillo Haha. Good. I was just trying to make sure you didn't get arrested. I don't want to miss your May entry because you were to busy being in jail for giving alcohol to a bee minor.

                                  kevintreaccar.com
                                  instagram.com/kevintreaccar

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                                  • ajillustrates
                                    ajillustrates @KevinTreaccar last edited by

                                    @Kevin-Treaccar Don't worry - I don't think @lizardillo would be looking at jail time, as that's just a mis-bee-meanor 😉

                                    https://ajillustrates.com
                                    https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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                                    • ellenseal_art
                                      ellenseal_art last edited by

                                      Congrats on your victory! It was well deserved ☺

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                                      • lizardillo
                                        lizardillo @ajillustrates last edited by

                                        @ajillustrates best to be careful, we don't want any bad bee-haviour

                                        Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                                        IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                                        • chrisaakins
                                          chrisaakins @lizardillo last edited by

                                          @lizardillo or is that bad beehive-yer. 😉

                                          Chris Akins
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