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    • KevinTreaccar
      KevinTreaccar @lizardillo last edited by

      @lizardillo As long as people get the point, it doesnโ€™t have to make perfect, technical sense. I love the idea of The Buzz Out at the Buzz Inn.

      Buzz Inn, Buzz Out or buzz off

      kevintreaccar.com
      instagram.com/kevintreaccar

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      • lizardillo
        lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

        Well after a good few rounds of revisions and changes and tantrums and starting again, I have eventually finished the line work. I may have to go over some parts with a lighter line as the new template is making it a bit fuzzy and it hard to see some details. hoping to get the colour done tonight and tomorrow when I can fit it in.

        I'm not sure about the beehive chimneys coming out of the sides of the top part. Should I remove them?

        Thanks

        Bee_Inn_Final.png

        Website: lizardillo.co.uk
        IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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        • Jacy13
          Jacy13 @lizardillo last edited by

          @lizardillo Wowzers! You've gotten so much detail done. I love it ๐Ÿ™‚

          Deviantart: https://www.deviantart.com/jacy13
          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/jacy13draws/?hl=en
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          • APHOTICMOTH
            APHOTICMOTH Moderator last edited by

            Amazing piece.

            All my links: https://APHOTICMOTH.carrd.co/

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            • Tiffany Thomas
              Tiffany Thomas last edited by

              WOW!!!!!!! Soooo amazing, love all the detail!!!!

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              • avfarrar
                avfarrar @lizardillo last edited by

                @lizardillo wow! I really love your design here!!

                There is beauty in life!

                WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
                www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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                • KevinTreaccar
                  KevinTreaccar last edited by

                  I think the chimneys are working. Just like the whole rest of the thing.

                  kevintreaccar.com
                  instagram.com/kevintreaccar

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                  • Valerie Light
                    Valerie Light last edited by

                    This is completely charming. I really like your line work here, and I love seeing how you worked through silhouettes and roughs to get to this point.

                    I like the 2 little chimneys at the top- lots of busy, angled, active things to look at. My one comment is that the attachment of the structure to the branch above looks a little awkward, mainly because the top curve of the structure and the lower right part of the branch share a tangent that makes the branch seem squeezed.

                    www.valerielightillustration.com
                    www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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                    • lizardillo
                      lizardillo last edited by

                      Hi All,

                      Thanks for the feedback. I have drawn back over with a thinner brush to try and keep the detail crisper.

                      @Kevintreaccar I actually deleted the chimneys before seeing this but I have added them back in as chimney 'flower' pots. @Valerie-Light I have had a look at the branch connection again and gone back to a string loop to give a bit of space between the branch. Thanks for pointing this out. Hope this looks a little better.

                      Thanks again everyone. It's a race to colour it now but I have really enjoyed this (eventually - after all of the frustrated revisions ๐Ÿ˜‚ ). The wooden cross beams will go on last, they may be a bit too much.

                      Looking forward to having a good look through the prompt thread later and seeing everyone's entries.

                      Bee_Inn_Lines.png

                      Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                      IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                      • Georgios Christopoulos
                        Georgios Christopoulos @lizardillo last edited by

                        @lizardillo I don't know how the colours will go, but I am Pretty sure this will be a winning piece. Congrats in advance!

                        Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/g.chris.artwork/
                        Deviantart : https://www.deviantart.com/g-chris

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                        • lizardillo
                          lizardillo @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by lizardillo

                          @Georgios-Christopoulos thank you. Iโ€™m not sure if Iโ€™ve put too much on here to be honest, but Iโ€™ve enjoyed myself creating it. I love yours too. That shark on the top of the lighthouse has such a great expression.

                          Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                          IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                          • lizardillo
                            lizardillo last edited by

                            The finished article. Thanks for your feedback all, it's really appreciated.

                            Inn_April21-LizOrton.jpg

                            Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                            IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                            • lizardillo
                              lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

                              I hope you don't mind but I just wanted to say thank you so much for all of the feedback, support and encouragement. For someone just finding their feet and trying to start a career in something she's always loved, it really means a lot.โ  I've popped this on instagram but I just wanted to say it in person here.

                              As someone not sure if how to approach potential clients I have found working to live briefs so useful and seeing everyone else's approach to the same brief is so great. I had not realised how wonderful it is to be part of a supportive and talented community who help and learn from each other.

                              I would really love to be able to have all three prompts to put up on my portfolio site (when I rework it) so I can be one step closer to plucking up the to courage to pitch for some paid work in this new direction I am trying to go in. I have never drawn a full environment before so I may ask for a little help with this month's prompt if that is ok. I will try to help others as much as I can but I am always a little nervous about posting a comment. I'm a bit of a British introvert sorry.

                              Drinks are on me in the Buzz Inn!! ๐Ÿบ ๐Ÿโ 

                              CHEERS!! ๐Ÿป

                              ::EDIT:: As Kevin has pointed out, he does look like he's drinking beer. Please be assured he is giving you a pint of non-alcoholic nectar. I should have thought about that ๐Ÿ˜ƒ #rookieerror

                              Cheers_lizardillo_insta.png

                              Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                              IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                              • KevinTreaccar
                                KevinTreaccar @lizardillo last edited by

                                @lizardillo Ummmm, is your โ€œyoung travelerโ€ old enough for that drink?

                                kevintreaccar.com
                                instagram.com/kevintreaccar

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                                • lizardillo
                                  lizardillo @KevinTreaccar last edited by lizardillo

                                  @Kevin-Treaccar It's nectar as it has no alcohol. ๐Ÿ˜‚

                                  Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                                  IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                                  • ajillustrates
                                    ajillustrates @lizardillo last edited by

                                    @lizardillo I was so happy that the Buzz Inn got the win; it's an incredible design and beautiful piece! Looking forward to your May illustration, and crossing my fingers for you to secure the hat-trick.

                                    https://ajillustrates.com
                                    https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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                                    • Janette
                                      Janette last edited by

                                      Your process and final piece was a joy to see! Love, love, love the little details and humour in this. Outstanding.

                                      Art is hard.
                                      https://www.instagram.com/janettehillart/

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                                      • lizardillo
                                        lizardillo @KevinTreaccar last edited by

                                        @Kevin-Treaccar I've updated the post. Thanks for pointing that out, I should have put some flowers on the glass. Oops ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

                                        Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                                        IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                                        • KevinTreaccar
                                          KevinTreaccar @lizardillo last edited by

                                          @lizardillo Haha. Good. I was just trying to make sure you didn't get arrested. I don't want to miss your May entry because you were to busy being in jail for giving alcohol to a bee minor.

                                          kevintreaccar.com
                                          instagram.com/kevintreaccar

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                                          • ajillustrates
                                            ajillustrates @KevinTreaccar last edited by

                                            @Kevin-Treaccar Don't worry - I don't think @lizardillo would be looking at jail time, as that's just a mis-bee-meanor ๐Ÿ˜‰

                                            https://ajillustrates.com
                                            https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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