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    • Jacy13
      Jacy13 @lizardillo last edited by

      @lizardillo Wowzers! You've gotten so much detail done. I love it ๐Ÿ™‚

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      • APHOTICMOTH
        APHOTICMOTH Moderator last edited by

        Amazing piece.

        All my links: https://APHOTICMOTH.carrd.co/

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        • Tiffany Thomas
          Tiffany Thomas last edited by

          WOW!!!!!!! Soooo amazing, love all the detail!!!!

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          • avfarrar
            avfarrar @lizardillo last edited by

            @lizardillo wow! I really love your design here!!

            There is beauty in life!

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            • KevinTreaccar
              KevinTreaccar last edited by

              I think the chimneys are working. Just like the whole rest of the thing.

              kevintreaccar.com
              instagram.com/kevintreaccar

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              • Valerie Light
                Valerie Light last edited by

                This is completely charming. I really like your line work here, and I love seeing how you worked through silhouettes and roughs to get to this point.

                I like the 2 little chimneys at the top- lots of busy, angled, active things to look at. My one comment is that the attachment of the structure to the branch above looks a little awkward, mainly because the top curve of the structure and the lower right part of the branch share a tangent that makes the branch seem squeezed.

                www.valerielightillustration.com
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                • lizardillo
                  lizardillo last edited by

                  Hi All,

                  Thanks for the feedback. I have drawn back over with a thinner brush to try and keep the detail crisper.

                  @Kevintreaccar I actually deleted the chimneys before seeing this but I have added them back in as chimney 'flower' pots. @Valerie-Light I have had a look at the branch connection again and gone back to a string loop to give a bit of space between the branch. Thanks for pointing this out. Hope this looks a little better.

                  Thanks again everyone. It's a race to colour it now but I have really enjoyed this (eventually - after all of the frustrated revisions ๐Ÿ˜‚ ). The wooden cross beams will go on last, they may be a bit too much.

                  Looking forward to having a good look through the prompt thread later and seeing everyone's entries.

                  Bee_Inn_Lines.png

                  Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                  IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                  • Georgios Christopoulos
                    Georgios Christopoulos @lizardillo last edited by

                    @lizardillo I don't know how the colours will go, but I am Pretty sure this will be a winning piece. Congrats in advance!

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                    • lizardillo
                      lizardillo @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by lizardillo

                      @Georgios-Christopoulos thank you. Iโ€™m not sure if Iโ€™ve put too much on here to be honest, but Iโ€™ve enjoyed myself creating it. I love yours too. That shark on the top of the lighthouse has such a great expression.

                      Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                      IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                      • lizardillo
                        lizardillo last edited by

                        The finished article. Thanks for your feedback all, it's really appreciated.

                        Inn_April21-LizOrton.jpg

                        Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                        IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                        • lizardillo
                          lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

                          I hope you don't mind but I just wanted to say thank you so much for all of the feedback, support and encouragement. For someone just finding their feet and trying to start a career in something she's always loved, it really means a lot.โ  I've popped this on instagram but I just wanted to say it in person here.

                          As someone not sure if how to approach potential clients I have found working to live briefs so useful and seeing everyone else's approach to the same brief is so great. I had not realised how wonderful it is to be part of a supportive and talented community who help and learn from each other.

                          I would really love to be able to have all three prompts to put up on my portfolio site (when I rework it) so I can be one step closer to plucking up the to courage to pitch for some paid work in this new direction I am trying to go in. I have never drawn a full environment before so I may ask for a little help with this month's prompt if that is ok. I will try to help others as much as I can but I am always a little nervous about posting a comment. I'm a bit of a British introvert sorry.

                          Drinks are on me in the Buzz Inn!! ๐Ÿบ ๐Ÿโ 

                          CHEERS!! ๐Ÿป

                          ::EDIT:: As Kevin has pointed out, he does look like he's drinking beer. Please be assured he is giving you a pint of non-alcoholic nectar. I should have thought about that ๐Ÿ˜ƒ #rookieerror

                          Cheers_lizardillo_insta.png

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                          IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                          • KevinTreaccar
                            KevinTreaccar @lizardillo last edited by

                            @lizardillo Ummmm, is your โ€œyoung travelerโ€ old enough for that drink?

                            kevintreaccar.com
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                            • lizardillo
                              lizardillo @KevinTreaccar last edited by lizardillo

                              @Kevin-Treaccar It's nectar as it has no alcohol. ๐Ÿ˜‚

                              Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                              IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                              • ajillustrates
                                ajillustrates @lizardillo last edited by

                                @lizardillo I was so happy that the Buzz Inn got the win; it's an incredible design and beautiful piece! Looking forward to your May illustration, and crossing my fingers for you to secure the hat-trick.

                                https://ajillustrates.com
                                https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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                                • Janette
                                  Janette last edited by

                                  Your process and final piece was a joy to see! Love, love, love the little details and humour in this. Outstanding.

                                  Art is hard.
                                  https://www.instagram.com/janettehillart/

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                                  • lizardillo
                                    lizardillo @KevinTreaccar last edited by

                                    @Kevin-Treaccar I've updated the post. Thanks for pointing that out, I should have put some flowers on the glass. Oops ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

                                    Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                                    IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                                    • KevinTreaccar
                                      KevinTreaccar @lizardillo last edited by

                                      @lizardillo Haha. Good. I was just trying to make sure you didn't get arrested. I don't want to miss your May entry because you were to busy being in jail for giving alcohol to a bee minor.

                                      kevintreaccar.com
                                      instagram.com/kevintreaccar

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                                      • ajillustrates
                                        ajillustrates @KevinTreaccar last edited by

                                        @Kevin-Treaccar Don't worry - I don't think @lizardillo would be looking at jail time, as that's just a mis-bee-meanor ๐Ÿ˜‰

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                                        https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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                                        • ellenseal_art
                                          ellenseal_art last edited by

                                          Congrats on your victory! It was well deserved โ˜บ

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                                          • lizardillo
                                            lizardillo @ajillustrates last edited by

                                            @ajillustrates best to be careful, we don't want any bad bee-haviour

                                            Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                                            IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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