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    • lizardillo
      lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

      Well after a good few rounds of revisions and changes and tantrums and starting again, I have eventually finished the line work. I may have to go over some parts with a lighter line as the new template is making it a bit fuzzy and it hard to see some details. hoping to get the colour done tonight and tomorrow when I can fit it in.

      I'm not sure about the beehive chimneys coming out of the sides of the top part. Should I remove them?

      Thanks

      Bee_Inn_Final.png

      Website: lizardillo.co.uk
      IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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      • Jacy13
        Jacy13 @lizardillo last edited by

        @lizardillo Wowzers! You've gotten so much detail done. I love it 🙂

        Deviantart: https://www.deviantart.com/jacy13
        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/jacy13draws/?hl=en
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        • APHOTICMOTH
          APHOTICMOTH Moderator last edited by

          Amazing piece.

          All my links: https://APHOTICMOTH.carrd.co/

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          • Tiffany Thomas
            Tiffany Thomas last edited by

            WOW!!!!!!! Soooo amazing, love all the detail!!!!

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            • avfarrar
              avfarrar @lizardillo last edited by

              @lizardillo wow! I really love your design here!!

              There is beauty in life!

              WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
              www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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              • KevinTreaccar
                KevinTreaccar last edited by

                I think the chimneys are working. Just like the whole rest of the thing.

                kevintreaccar.com
                instagram.com/kevintreaccar

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                • Valerie Light
                  Valerie Light last edited by

                  This is completely charming. I really like your line work here, and I love seeing how you worked through silhouettes and roughs to get to this point.

                  I like the 2 little chimneys at the top- lots of busy, angled, active things to look at. My one comment is that the attachment of the structure to the branch above looks a little awkward, mainly because the top curve of the structure and the lower right part of the branch share a tangent that makes the branch seem squeezed.

                  www.valerielightillustration.com
                  www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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                  • lizardillo
                    lizardillo last edited by

                    Hi All,

                    Thanks for the feedback. I have drawn back over with a thinner brush to try and keep the detail crisper.

                    @Kevintreaccar I actually deleted the chimneys before seeing this but I have added them back in as chimney 'flower' pots. @Valerie-Light I have had a look at the branch connection again and gone back to a string loop to give a bit of space between the branch. Thanks for pointing this out. Hope this looks a little better.

                    Thanks again everyone. It's a race to colour it now but I have really enjoyed this (eventually - after all of the frustrated revisions 😂 ). The wooden cross beams will go on last, they may be a bit too much.

                    Looking forward to having a good look through the prompt thread later and seeing everyone's entries.

                    Bee_Inn_Lines.png

                    Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                    IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                    • Georgios Christopoulos
                      Georgios Christopoulos @lizardillo last edited by

                      @lizardillo I don't know how the colours will go, but I am Pretty sure this will be a winning piece. Congrats in advance!

                      Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/g.chris.artwork/
                      Deviantart : https://www.deviantart.com/g-chris

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                      • lizardillo
                        lizardillo @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by lizardillo

                        @Georgios-Christopoulos thank you. I’m not sure if I’ve put too much on here to be honest, but I’ve enjoyed myself creating it. I love yours too. That shark on the top of the lighthouse has such a great expression.

                        Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                        IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                        • lizardillo
                          lizardillo last edited by

                          The finished article. Thanks for your feedback all, it's really appreciated.

                          Inn_April21-LizOrton.jpg

                          Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                          IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                          • lizardillo
                            lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

                            I hope you don't mind but I just wanted to say thank you so much for all of the feedback, support and encouragement. For someone just finding their feet and trying to start a career in something she's always loved, it really means a lot.⁠ I've popped this on instagram but I just wanted to say it in person here.

                            As someone not sure if how to approach potential clients I have found working to live briefs so useful and seeing everyone else's approach to the same brief is so great. I had not realised how wonderful it is to be part of a supportive and talented community who help and learn from each other.

                            I would really love to be able to have all three prompts to put up on my portfolio site (when I rework it) so I can be one step closer to plucking up the to courage to pitch for some paid work in this new direction I am trying to go in. I have never drawn a full environment before so I may ask for a little help with this month's prompt if that is ok. I will try to help others as much as I can but I am always a little nervous about posting a comment. I'm a bit of a British introvert sorry.

                            Drinks are on me in the Buzz Inn!! 🍺 🐝⁠

                            CHEERS!! 🍻

                            ::EDIT:: As Kevin has pointed out, he does look like he's drinking beer. Please be assured he is giving you a pint of non-alcoholic nectar. I should have thought about that 😃 #rookieerror

                            Cheers_lizardillo_insta.png

                            Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                            IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                            • KevinTreaccar
                              KevinTreaccar @lizardillo last edited by

                              @lizardillo Ummmm, is your “young traveler” old enough for that drink?

                              kevintreaccar.com
                              instagram.com/kevintreaccar

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                              • lizardillo
                                lizardillo @KevinTreaccar last edited by lizardillo

                                @Kevin-Treaccar It's nectar as it has no alcohol. 😂

                                Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                                IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                                • ajillustrates
                                  ajillustrates @lizardillo last edited by

                                  @lizardillo I was so happy that the Buzz Inn got the win; it's an incredible design and beautiful piece! Looking forward to your May illustration, and crossing my fingers for you to secure the hat-trick.

                                  https://ajillustrates.com
                                  https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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                                  • Janette
                                    Janette last edited by

                                    Your process and final piece was a joy to see! Love, love, love the little details and humour in this. Outstanding.

                                    Art is hard.
                                    https://www.instagram.com/janettehillart/

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                                    • lizardillo
                                      lizardillo @KevinTreaccar last edited by

                                      @Kevin-Treaccar I've updated the post. Thanks for pointing that out, I should have put some flowers on the glass. Oops 😃

                                      Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                                      IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                                      • KevinTreaccar
                                        KevinTreaccar @lizardillo last edited by

                                        @lizardillo Haha. Good. I was just trying to make sure you didn't get arrested. I don't want to miss your May entry because you were to busy being in jail for giving alcohol to a bee minor.

                                        kevintreaccar.com
                                        instagram.com/kevintreaccar

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                                        • ajillustrates
                                          ajillustrates @KevinTreaccar last edited by

                                          @Kevin-Treaccar Don't worry - I don't think @lizardillo would be looking at jail time, as that's just a mis-bee-meanor 😉

                                          https://ajillustrates.com
                                          https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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                                          • ellenseal_art
                                            ellenseal_art last edited by

                                            Congrats on your victory! It was well deserved ☺

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