@chrisaakins thank you so much! This is exactly the type of feedback I’m looking for. I think you raise great points, this could really be pushed to show a more impoverished lifestyle. I also thought the pitcher might be too much of a focal point! When I showed it to a few other people they did’t see it as an issue at all but I think I at least gotta remove the highlights on it.
@marek-halko it's working well. It seems like a fast way to keep those sharp edges. Faster than going over everything with a tiny brush, which is what I tend to do.
@davidhohn yay! Thank you! I’m a little annoyed at the tangent between the top of the bed and the bottom of the wall. But I’m wondering if I could get rid of it with blankets or some thing… I’m going to try to make this into a finished piece. I’ll post it when I’m done. ☺️
@lauraa well I love your style and I thinks it classic. I think because it’s not popular right now it’s a very nice refreshing look. And I think you add a fresh look to it. I would suggest lightening the kids value.
@carlianne This is great feed back and a wonderful tip on how to get the lines just right. I struggled with the same thing in my drawing but couldn't figure out how to correct it. Thanks for the clear explanation.
@ambria Awesome start on tackling perspective. Hope you kept at it over the last couples months (as I am now just getting into the forums).
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Thank you for the heads up. I just finished week one, and just finished up with the reading assignments. I’ll keep an open mind with the technical issues that are in my future.
@eyedoono This was so hard for me too. It was like a mental gap I couldn't span. It took me so long to be able to start forming the room. Don't feel bad! The best way I could describe what worked for me was starting by drawing the cubes farthest away that represent the furniture pieces farthest away spaced appropriately using the floor grid first. Then use that to create the wall grid as I built it from the ground up. Hope that makes sense, and can help. Good luck!
@griffin sorry can you show Will's version too? 😂 If it's just flipped upside down I think you get the same result. Right now the image you have has no saturation on the left full saturation on the right and then darker value going downward
Hi, @adam-thornton-0 ! Thanks a lot for your feedback and ideas. I will try to paint Santa dark on light. I like your idea with hard edges. I really feel like the objects are being lost on the background. I do need to push this more. I would love to see your Santa's factory illustration too!
Wow great work. What a fun assignment and how cool is it to see the room you’ve become familiar with interpreted so many different ways on this forum. Great job!
Yeah looking good. The final on this course is super fun. And placing the stuff exactly where you intend for the first time feels like unlocking a super power. Keep rolling!
Hi guys. New here and just finished the second course on the main pathway on perspective. Boy have I learned a ton these last few weeks. Wanted to share my final work and get some feedback. For context I’ve always liked cartooning and drawing characters but they were always front on and very flat. This is my first completed drawing with a scene and the breakthrough on these first two courses to place things into a space was so fun. Look forward to learning even more.
