There is so much expression in your gestures on the top image, you may be stuck in the frustration loop (haha, I know it well) but from what I can see it looks like you've got something there. Keep going, can't wait to see how your character developers.
I wanted her posture to be supportive of her being scared; kind of like a "What is that!?" kind of moment. I will see if I can adjust it though. Thanks so much for the feedback! 😃
I'm creating a character that I actually was already in the midst of planning to create a whole comic project for (this month's challenge fit perfectly). I will be posting updates about it soon!
@Asyas_illos Thank you for the encouragement. I definitely lean towards line work because one of my sources of income (small, but its a start) is coloring sheets.