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    LIVE CRITIQUES: Inktober Submissions

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    • Maureen
      Maureen SVS OG last edited by

      My first Inktober and this was my entry for Sleep. Lots of room for improvement, I know, but would love some expert guidance.
      SVS_Inktober-Day21-Sleep_MBF.jpg

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      • Kim Rosenlof
        Kim Rosenlof last edited by

        I am excited to get feedback on my piece. Thanks so much for doing this! I really appreciate it. RadioInkedGirl.jpg

        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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        • Coley
          Coley @marek.halko last edited by

          @marek-halko this is too awesome 😎

          https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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          • marek.halko
            marek.halko @Coley last edited by

            @Coley haha, thank you😊!

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            • Georgios Christopoulos
              Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

              I had a really hard time figuring which artwork I wanted to showcase..
              So I chose the one that I feel something is off, but can't really find what. Day 23,Rip!
              I still like how it came out though. 😊😊😊
              Thanks for the opportunity!!

              day23.jpg

              Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/g.chris.artwork/
              Deviantart : https://www.deviantart.com/g-chris

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              • Doodleworx
                Doodleworx last edited by

                6779EEE5-5966-47E6-9A8B-72B3CB390990.jpeg here’s mine, day 30-ominous. I’m way ahead this year.

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                • J
                  JennyJones last edited by

                  Inktober_Rodent_2020.jpg

                  Here is my submission for the critique. Thanks for the opportunity.

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                  • AustinShurtliff
                    AustinShurtliff SVS Team last edited by

                    Thank you to everyone that has submitted something! There are still a few hours left to post an image you created for Inktober this year for a chance to get it critiqued on next weeks Jump Session.

                    Austin Shurtliff
                    austin@svslearn.com

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                    • Cayleen
                      Cayleen last edited by

                      I seem to lose focus and clarity when my pictures get busier. I'd love to learn how to improve that! dc2df0a2-4870-4005-8dc4-1b4180f0ac08-image.png

                      Cayleen Blackmore

                      cayleencreates.com
                      https://www.instagram.com/cayleencreates/

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                      • ArtofAleksey
                        ArtofAleksey last edited by

                        All these look great i hope everyone had fun everyone should be proud of participating this year, theres a lot happening and you still powered through

                        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                        alekseyillustration.com

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                        • Elliot
                          Elliot last edited by

                          8E576529-7D7E-4DDC-81C6-AAD76844FE99.jpeg

                          Submitting my piece for “rip” (hope it’s ok that it’s mixed media).

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                          • silvialcg
                            silvialcg last edited by

                            This is my Inktober2020 music illustration. It’s the fastest illustration I’ve ever made! So just for that, I’m happy... I did struggle a bit with the lights, I wanted these super cool stage lights, but not sure I achieved that... wish I’d had more time for inktober this year! So much work... 😞

                            D9720F9E-643F-4CA7-913B-575FFA654C01.jpeg

                            Silvia Lopez-Cepero
                            https://www.instagram.com/silvia.lopez.cepero/

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                            • LisaF
                              LisaF SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                              A big thank you to everyone who submitted! We'll be doing live critiques of the work TODAY at 2pm MDT (check here for other time zones). See you in a bit!

                              Director of Sunshine and Rainbows
                              lisa@svslearn.com

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                              • Jeremy Ross
                                Jeremy Ross @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                                Thank you for yesterday’s constructive feedback @Will-Terry and @Jake-Parker, very insightful!

                                https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
                                https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
                                https://twitter.com/jeremyrayross
                                https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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                                • Doodleworx
                                  Doodleworx last edited by

                                  Thank you very much Jake and Will! I appreciated your critiques.

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                                  • Elliot
                                    Elliot last edited by

                                    Thanks so much guys! Pointing out the more 3D elements vs flat was something I couldn’t pinpoint but was struggling with. And concept/story has been my biggest struggle. But it’s good to know the other elements I have been focusing on (composition, value and rendering) are working.

                                    Watching everyone else’s critiques was helpful too.

                                    I definitely hope to see more of this style of critique if y’all have the time for them 😄

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