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    LIVE CRITIQUES: Inktober Submissions

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    • djlambson
      djlambson last edited by djlambson

      Fancy Rodents

      foliorodentsink.jpg

      https://www.instagram.com/deborahlambson_art/
      https://deborahlambson.com/folio

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      • deborah Haagenson
        deborah Haagenson last edited by

        I am participating in inktober. I sure woul like some suggestions regarding hair, fur, human faces and hands. I am submitting my 'Wisp' drawing. I used a ball point pen for this, which I have found to be very useful when I need a light touch. I found inking the hand to be difficult.
        Sketchtember_2020_2_72.jpg

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        • miranda-hoover
          miranda-hoover last edited by

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          Here is my Inktober image for prompts 5-8: blade, rodent, fancy, and teeth.
          I'm looking forward to watching the live critique!

          https://www.instagram.com/mirananemone

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          • chrisaakins
            chrisaakins last edited by

            Here is the pic I would like critiqued.
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            Chris Akins
            www.chrisakinsart.com
            www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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            • marek.halko
              marek.halko last edited by marek.halko

              Hi, trying my luck with this one...

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              • K.Flagg
                K.Flagg last edited by

                I had a hard time with this page. There is not as much contrast as most of my other pages so I would love a critique to figure out what I could have done better.

                FTWR PG 23.jpg

                K.Flagg

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                • Maureen
                  Maureen SVS OG last edited by

                  My first Inktober and this was my entry for Sleep. Lots of room for improvement, I know, but would love some expert guidance.
                  SVS_Inktober-Day21-Sleep_MBF.jpg

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                  • Kim Rosenlof
                    Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                    I am excited to get feedback on my piece. Thanks so much for doing this! I really appreciate it. RadioInkedGirl.jpg

                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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                    • Coley
                      Coley @marek.halko last edited by

                      @marek-halko this is too awesome 😎

                      https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                      • marek.halko
                        marek.halko @Coley last edited by

                        @Coley haha, thank you😊!

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                        • Georgios Christopoulos
                          Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                          I had a really hard time figuring which artwork I wanted to showcase..
                          So I chose the one that I feel something is off, but can't really find what. Day 23,Rip!
                          I still like how it came out though. 😊😊😊
                          Thanks for the opportunity!!

                          day23.jpg

                          Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/g.chris.artwork/
                          Deviantart : https://www.deviantart.com/g-chris

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                          • Doodleworx
                            Doodleworx last edited by

                            6779EEE5-5966-47E6-9A8B-72B3CB390990.jpeg here’s mine, day 30-ominous. I’m way ahead this year.

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                            • J
                              JennyJones last edited by

                              Inktober_Rodent_2020.jpg

                              Here is my submission for the critique. Thanks for the opportunity.

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                              • AustinShurtliff
                                AustinShurtliff SVS Team last edited by

                                Thank you to everyone that has submitted something! There are still a few hours left to post an image you created for Inktober this year for a chance to get it critiqued on next weeks Jump Session.

                                Austin Shurtliff
                                austin@svslearn.com

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                                • Cayleen
                                  Cayleen last edited by

                                  I seem to lose focus and clarity when my pictures get busier. I'd love to learn how to improve that! dc2df0a2-4870-4005-8dc4-1b4180f0ac08-image.png

                                  Cayleen Blackmore

                                  cayleencreates.com
                                  https://www.instagram.com/cayleencreates/

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                                  • ArtofAleksey
                                    ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                    All these look great i hope everyone had fun everyone should be proud of participating this year, theres a lot happening and you still powered through

                                    instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                    alekseyillustration.com

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                                    • Elliot
                                      Elliot last edited by

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                                      Submitting my piece for “rip” (hope it’s ok that it’s mixed media).

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                                      • silvialcg
                                        silvialcg last edited by

                                        This is my Inktober2020 music illustration. It’s the fastest illustration I’ve ever made! So just for that, I’m happy... I did struggle a bit with the lights, I wanted these super cool stage lights, but not sure I achieved that... wish I’d had more time for inktober this year! So much work... 😞

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                                        Silvia Lopez-Cepero
                                        https://www.instagram.com/silvia.lopez.cepero/

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                                        • LisaF
                                          LisaF SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                                          A big thank you to everyone who submitted! We'll be doing live critiques of the work TODAY at 2pm MDT (check here for other time zones). See you in a bit!

                                          Director of Sunshine and Rainbows
                                          lisa@svslearn.com

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                                          • Jeremy Ross
                                            Jeremy Ross @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                                            Thank you for yesterday’s constructive feedback @Will-Terry and @Jake-Parker, very insightful!

                                            https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
                                            https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
                                            https://twitter.com/jeremyrayross
                                            https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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