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    LIVE CRITIQUES: Inktober Submissions

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    • Rachel Horne
      Rachel Horne last edited by

      It's hard to choose one, I'm torn between choosing a piece that I really liked or one that I think needed improving? I think I'll go for the latter...

      outpost.jpg

      www.rachel-horne.com
      instagram.com/rachel_horne_art

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      • Jeremy Ross
        Jeremy Ross @AustinShurtliff last edited by Jeremy Ross

        Hi @AustinShurtliff, thanks for the opportunity.

        I’m so undecided on which Inktober piece to submit, so I asked my wife and daughter to vote on their favorite, and here it is!

        I had so much fun inking this on my daughter’s dry erase board.

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        https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
        https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
        https://twitter.com/jeremyrayross
        https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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        • Oriana Fernandez
          Oriana Fernandez last edited by

          Hi @AustinShurtliff, here is my Primal + Inktober piece. Thanks for this opportunity!

          Day 11 Primal Disease.jpg

          https://www.instagram.com/oriana_fernandez_/
          My blog: https://orianafernandez.wordpress.com/2018/05/16/28-twilight-stories-or-the-flight-of-the-wryter-and-the-weaver/

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          • aska
            aska last edited by aska

            Hope 🙂
            inktober2020_hope.jpg

            Aska
            www.mugaska.com
            https://www.instagram.com/mugaska/
            https://www.etsy.com/uk/shop/mugaska

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            • Kyle Tobey
              Kyle Tobey last edited by

              Here’s mine for float. Untitled_Artwork.pdf
              PDF is better quality in case it’s blurry! 5AAD6B13-987A-4BB4-91DE-7BBB064B2AE4.jpeg

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              • djlambson
                djlambson last edited by djlambson

                Fancy Rodents

                foliorodentsink.jpg

                https://www.instagram.com/deborahlambson_art/
                https://deborahlambson.com/folio

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                • deborah Haagenson
                  deborah Haagenson last edited by

                  I am participating in inktober. I sure woul like some suggestions regarding hair, fur, human faces and hands. I am submitting my 'Wisp' drawing. I used a ball point pen for this, which I have found to be very useful when I need a light touch. I found inking the hand to be difficult.
                  Sketchtember_2020_2_72.jpg

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                  • miranda-hoover
                    miranda-hoover last edited by

                    Untitled_Artwork 11.jpg

                    Here is my Inktober image for prompts 5-8: blade, rodent, fancy, and teeth.
                    I'm looking forward to watching the live critique!

                    https://www.instagram.com/mirananemone

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                    • chrisaakins
                      chrisaakins last edited by

                      Here is the pic I would like critiqued.
                      BF4D169B-5778-48A2-BF7B-E012684CFA72.jpeg

                      Chris Akins
                      www.chrisakinsart.com
                      www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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                      • marek.halko
                        marek.halko last edited by marek.halko

                        Hi, trying my luck with this one...

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                        • K.Flagg
                          K.Flagg last edited by

                          I had a hard time with this page. There is not as much contrast as most of my other pages so I would love a critique to figure out what I could have done better.

                          FTWR PG 23.jpg

                          K.Flagg

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                          • Maureen
                            Maureen SVS OG last edited by

                            My first Inktober and this was my entry for Sleep. Lots of room for improvement, I know, but would love some expert guidance.
                            SVS_Inktober-Day21-Sleep_MBF.jpg

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                            • Kim Rosenlof
                              Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                              I am excited to get feedback on my piece. Thanks so much for doing this! I really appreciate it. RadioInkedGirl.jpg

                              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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                              • Coley
                                Coley @marek.halko last edited by

                                @marek-halko this is too awesome 😎

                                https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                                • marek.halko
                                  marek.halko @Coley last edited by

                                  @Coley haha, thank you😊!

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                                  • Georgios Christopoulos
                                    Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                                    I had a really hard time figuring which artwork I wanted to showcase..
                                    So I chose the one that I feel something is off, but can't really find what. Day 23,Rip!
                                    I still like how it came out though. 😊😊😊
                                    Thanks for the opportunity!!

                                    day23.jpg

                                    Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/g.chris.artwork/
                                    Deviantart : https://www.deviantart.com/g-chris

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                                    • Doodleworx
                                      Doodleworx last edited by

                                      6779EEE5-5966-47E6-9A8B-72B3CB390990.jpeg here’s mine, day 30-ominous. I’m way ahead this year.

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                                      • J
                                        JennyJones last edited by

                                        Inktober_Rodent_2020.jpg

                                        Here is my submission for the critique. Thanks for the opportunity.

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                                        • AustinShurtliff
                                          AustinShurtliff SVS Team last edited by

                                          Thank you to everyone that has submitted something! There are still a few hours left to post an image you created for Inktober this year for a chance to get it critiqued on next weeks Jump Session.

                                          Austin Shurtliff
                                          austin@svslearn.com

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                                          • Cayleen
                                            Cayleen last edited by

                                            I seem to lose focus and clarity when my pictures get busier. I'd love to learn how to improve that! dc2df0a2-4870-4005-8dc4-1b4180f0ac08-image.png

                                            Cayleen Blackmore

                                            cayleencreates.com
                                            https://www.instagram.com/cayleencreates/

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