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    LIVE CRITIQUES: Inktober Submissions

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    • AustinShurtliff
      AustinShurtliff SVS Team @VeronicaMui last edited by

      @VeronicaMui yes, as long as the trial doesn't expire before the 29th.

      Austin Shurtliff
      austin@svslearn.com

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      • Norman Morana
        Norman Morana last edited by

        I'll throw my hat in the ring ๐Ÿ™‚ This piece was a lot of fun to create and I enjoy it, but I also know there's room for improvement.

        Inktober_2020_12_LoRes.jpg

        Onwards,

        Norman

        normanmoranaillustration.com
        instagram.com/norman_morana/

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        • frankiiij
          frankiiij last edited by

          Can it be a piece that I have already created?

          Much love and God bless!

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          • Rachel Horne
            Rachel Horne last edited by

            It's hard to choose one, I'm torn between choosing a piece that I really liked or one that I think needed improving? I think I'll go for the latter...

            outpost.jpg

            www.rachel-horne.com
            instagram.com/rachel_horne_art

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            • Jeremy Ross
              Jeremy Ross @AustinShurtliff last edited by Jeremy Ross

              Hi @AustinShurtliff, thanks for the opportunity.

              Iโ€™m so undecided on which Inktober piece to submit, so I asked my wife and daughter to vote on their favorite, and here it is!

              I had so much fun inking this on my daughterโ€™s dry erase board.

              9B03F109-D748-4BC7-90C1-7AC1E2BBBBD3.jpeg

              https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
              https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
              https://twitter.com/jeremyrayross
              https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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              • Oriana Fernandez
                Oriana Fernandez last edited by

                Hi @AustinShurtliff, here is my Primal + Inktober piece. Thanks for this opportunity!

                Day 11 Primal Disease.jpg

                https://www.instagram.com/oriana_fernandez_/
                My blog: https://orianafernandez.wordpress.com/2018/05/16/28-twilight-stories-or-the-flight-of-the-wryter-and-the-weaver/

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                • aska
                  aska last edited by aska

                  Hope ๐Ÿ™‚
                  inktober2020_hope.jpg

                  Aska
                  www.mugaska.com
                  https://www.instagram.com/mugaska/
                  https://www.etsy.com/uk/shop/mugaska

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                  • Kyle Tobey
                    Kyle Tobey last edited by

                    Hereโ€™s mine for float. Untitled_Artwork.pdf
                    PDF is better quality in case itโ€™s blurry! 5AAD6B13-987A-4BB4-91DE-7BBB064B2AE4.jpeg

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                    • djlambson
                      djlambson last edited by djlambson

                      Fancy Rodents

                      foliorodentsink.jpg

                      https://www.instagram.com/deborahlambson_art/
                      https://deborahlambson.com/folio

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                      • deborah Haagenson
                        deborah Haagenson last edited by

                        I am participating in inktober. I sure woul like some suggestions regarding hair, fur, human faces and hands. I am submitting my 'Wisp' drawing. I used a ball point pen for this, which I have found to be very useful when I need a light touch. I found inking the hand to be difficult.
                        Sketchtember_2020_2_72.jpg

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                        • miranda-hoover
                          miranda-hoover last edited by

                          Untitled_Artwork 11.jpg

                          Here is my Inktober image for prompts 5-8: blade, rodent, fancy, and teeth.
                          I'm looking forward to watching the live critique!

                          https://www.instagram.com/mirananemone

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                          • chrisaakins
                            chrisaakins last edited by

                            Here is the pic I would like critiqued.
                            BF4D169B-5778-48A2-BF7B-E012684CFA72.jpeg

                            Chris Akins
                            www.chrisakinsart.com
                            www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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                            • marek.halko
                              marek.halko last edited by marek.halko

                              Hi, trying my luck with this one...

                              20201024_105714.png

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                              • K.Flagg
                                K.Flagg last edited by

                                I had a hard time with this page. There is not as much contrast as most of my other pages so I would love a critique to figure out what I could have done better.

                                FTWR PG 23.jpg

                                K.Flagg

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                                • Maureen
                                  Maureen SVS OG last edited by

                                  My first Inktober and this was my entry for Sleep. Lots of room for improvement, I know, but would love some expert guidance.
                                  SVS_Inktober-Day21-Sleep_MBF.jpg

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                                  • Kim Rosenlof
                                    Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                                    I am excited to get feedback on my piece. Thanks so much for doing this! I really appreciate it. RadioInkedGirl.jpg

                                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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                                    • Coley
                                      Coley @marek.halko last edited by

                                      @marek-halko this is too awesome ๐Ÿ˜Ž

                                      https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                                      • marek.halko
                                        marek.halko @Coley last edited by

                                        @Coley haha, thank you๐Ÿ˜Š!

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                                        • Georgios Christopoulos
                                          Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                                          I had a really hard time figuring which artwork I wanted to showcase..
                                          So I chose the one that I feel something is off, but can't really find what. Day 23,Rip!
                                          I still like how it came out though. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
                                          Thanks for the opportunity!!

                                          day23.jpg

                                          Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/g.chris.artwork/
                                          Deviantart : https://www.deviantart.com/g-chris

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                                          • Doodleworx
                                            Doodleworx last edited by

                                            6779EEE5-5966-47E6-9A8B-72B3CB390990.jpeg hereโ€™s mine, day 30-ominous. Iโ€™m way ahead this year.

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