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    LIVE CRITIQUES: Inktober Submissions

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    • Jeremy Ross
      Jeremy Ross @AustinShurtliff last edited by Jeremy Ross

      Hi @AustinShurtliff, thanks for the opportunity.

      I’m so undecided on which Inktober piece to submit, so I asked my wife and daughter to vote on their favorite, and here it is!

      I had so much fun inking this on my daughter’s dry erase board.

      9B03F109-D748-4BC7-90C1-7AC1E2BBBBD3.jpeg

      https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
      https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
      https://twitter.com/jeremyrayross
      https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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      • Oriana Fernandez
        Oriana Fernandez last edited by

        Hi @AustinShurtliff, here is my Primal + Inktober piece. Thanks for this opportunity!

        Day 11 Primal Disease.jpg

        https://www.instagram.com/oriana_fernandez_/
        My blog: https://orianafernandez.wordpress.com/2018/05/16/28-twilight-stories-or-the-flight-of-the-wryter-and-the-weaver/

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        • aska
          aska last edited by aska

          Hope 🙂
          inktober2020_hope.jpg

          Aska
          www.mugaska.com
          https://www.instagram.com/mugaska/
          https://www.etsy.com/uk/shop/mugaska

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          • Kyle Tobey
            Kyle Tobey last edited by

            Here’s mine for float. Untitled_Artwork.pdf
            PDF is better quality in case it’s blurry! 5AAD6B13-987A-4BB4-91DE-7BBB064B2AE4.jpeg

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            • djlambson
              djlambson last edited by djlambson

              Fancy Rodents

              foliorodentsink.jpg

              https://www.instagram.com/deborahlambson_art/
              https://deborahlambson.com/folio

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              • deborah Haagenson
                deborah Haagenson last edited by

                I am participating in inktober. I sure woul like some suggestions regarding hair, fur, human faces and hands. I am submitting my 'Wisp' drawing. I used a ball point pen for this, which I have found to be very useful when I need a light touch. I found inking the hand to be difficult.
                Sketchtember_2020_2_72.jpg

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                • miranda-hoover
                  miranda-hoover last edited by

                  Untitled_Artwork 11.jpg

                  Here is my Inktober image for prompts 5-8: blade, rodent, fancy, and teeth.
                  I'm looking forward to watching the live critique!

                  https://www.instagram.com/mirananemone

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                  • chrisaakins
                    chrisaakins last edited by

                    Here is the pic I would like critiqued.
                    BF4D169B-5778-48A2-BF7B-E012684CFA72.jpeg

                    Chris Akins
                    www.chrisakinsart.com
                    www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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                    • marek.halko
                      marek.halko last edited by marek.halko

                      Hi, trying my luck with this one...

                      20201024_105714.png

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                      • K.Flagg
                        K.Flagg last edited by

                        I had a hard time with this page. There is not as much contrast as most of my other pages so I would love a critique to figure out what I could have done better.

                        FTWR PG 23.jpg

                        K.Flagg

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                        • Maureen
                          Maureen SVS OG last edited by

                          My first Inktober and this was my entry for Sleep. Lots of room for improvement, I know, but would love some expert guidance.
                          SVS_Inktober-Day21-Sleep_MBF.jpg

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                          • Kim Rosenlof
                            Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                            I am excited to get feedback on my piece. Thanks so much for doing this! I really appreciate it. RadioInkedGirl.jpg

                            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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                            • Coley
                              Coley @marek.halko last edited by

                              @marek-halko this is too awesome 😎

                              https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                              • marek.halko
                                marek.halko @Coley last edited by

                                @Coley haha, thank you😊!

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                                • Georgios Christopoulos
                                  Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                                  I had a really hard time figuring which artwork I wanted to showcase..
                                  So I chose the one that I feel something is off, but can't really find what. Day 23,Rip!
                                  I still like how it came out though. 😊😊😊
                                  Thanks for the opportunity!!

                                  day23.jpg

                                  Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/g.chris.artwork/
                                  Deviantart : https://www.deviantart.com/g-chris

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                                  • Doodleworx
                                    Doodleworx last edited by

                                    6779EEE5-5966-47E6-9A8B-72B3CB390990.jpeg here’s mine, day 30-ominous. I’m way ahead this year.

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                                    • J
                                      JennyJones last edited by

                                      Inktober_Rodent_2020.jpg

                                      Here is my submission for the critique. Thanks for the opportunity.

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                                      • AustinShurtliff
                                        AustinShurtliff SVS Team last edited by

                                        Thank you to everyone that has submitted something! There are still a few hours left to post an image you created for Inktober this year for a chance to get it critiqued on next weeks Jump Session.

                                        Austin Shurtliff
                                        austin@svslearn.com

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                                        • Cayleen
                                          Cayleen last edited by

                                          I seem to lose focus and clarity when my pictures get busier. I'd love to learn how to improve that! dc2df0a2-4870-4005-8dc4-1b4180f0ac08-image.png

                                          Cayleen Blackmore

                                          cayleencreates.com
                                          https://www.instagram.com/cayleencreates/

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                                          • ArtofAleksey
                                            ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                            All these look great i hope everyone had fun everyone should be proud of participating this year, theres a lot happening and you still powered through

                                            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                            alekseyillustration.com

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