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    LIVE CRITIQUES: Inktober Submissions

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    • miranda-hoover
      miranda-hoover last edited by

      Untitled_Artwork 11.jpg

      Here is my Inktober image for prompts 5-8: blade, rodent, fancy, and teeth.
      I'm looking forward to watching the live critique!

      https://www.instagram.com/mirananemone

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      • chrisaakins
        chrisaakins last edited by

        Here is the pic I would like critiqued.
        BF4D169B-5778-48A2-BF7B-E012684CFA72.jpeg

        Chris Akins
        www.chrisakinsart.com
        www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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        • marek.halko
          marek.halko last edited by marek.halko

          Hi, trying my luck with this one...

          20201024_105714.png

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          • K.Flagg
            K.Flagg last edited by

            I had a hard time with this page. There is not as much contrast as most of my other pages so I would love a critique to figure out what I could have done better.

            FTWR PG 23.jpg

            K.Flagg

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            • Maureen
              Maureen SVS OG last edited by

              My first Inktober and this was my entry for Sleep. Lots of room for improvement, I know, but would love some expert guidance.
              SVS_Inktober-Day21-Sleep_MBF.jpg

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              • Kim Rosenlof
                Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                I am excited to get feedback on my piece. Thanks so much for doing this! I really appreciate it. RadioInkedGirl.jpg

                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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                • Coley
                  Coley @marek.halko last edited by

                  @marek-halko this is too awesome 😎

                  https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                  • marek.halko
                    marek.halko @Coley last edited by

                    @Coley haha, thank you😊!

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                    • Georgios Christopoulos
                      Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                      I had a really hard time figuring which artwork I wanted to showcase..
                      So I chose the one that I feel something is off, but can't really find what. Day 23,Rip!
                      I still like how it came out though. 😊😊😊
                      Thanks for the opportunity!!

                      day23.jpg

                      Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/g.chris.artwork/
                      Deviantart : https://www.deviantart.com/g-chris

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                      • Doodleworx
                        Doodleworx last edited by

                        6779EEE5-5966-47E6-9A8B-72B3CB390990.jpeg here’s mine, day 30-ominous. I’m way ahead this year.

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                        • J
                          JennyJones last edited by

                          Inktober_Rodent_2020.jpg

                          Here is my submission for the critique. Thanks for the opportunity.

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                          • AustinShurtliff
                            AustinShurtliff SVS Team last edited by

                            Thank you to everyone that has submitted something! There are still a few hours left to post an image you created for Inktober this year for a chance to get it critiqued on next weeks Jump Session.

                            Austin Shurtliff
                            austin@svslearn.com

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                            • Cayleen
                              Cayleen last edited by

                              I seem to lose focus and clarity when my pictures get busier. I'd love to learn how to improve that! dc2df0a2-4870-4005-8dc4-1b4180f0ac08-image.png

                              Cayleen Blackmore

                              cayleencreates.com
                              https://www.instagram.com/cayleencreates/

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                              • ArtofAleksey
                                ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                All these look great i hope everyone had fun everyone should be proud of participating this year, theres a lot happening and you still powered through

                                instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                alekseyillustration.com

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                                • Elliot
                                  Elliot last edited by

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                                  Submitting my piece for “rip” (hope it’s ok that it’s mixed media).

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                                  • silvialcg
                                    silvialcg last edited by

                                    This is my Inktober2020 music illustration. It’s the fastest illustration I’ve ever made! So just for that, I’m happy... I did struggle a bit with the lights, I wanted these super cool stage lights, but not sure I achieved that... wish I’d had more time for inktober this year! So much work... 😞

                                    D9720F9E-643F-4CA7-913B-575FFA654C01.jpeg

                                    Silvia Lopez-Cepero
                                    https://www.instagram.com/silvia.lopez.cepero/

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                                    • LisaF
                                      LisaF SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                                      A big thank you to everyone who submitted! We'll be doing live critiques of the work TODAY at 2pm MDT (check here for other time zones). See you in a bit!

                                      Director of Sunshine and Rainbows
                                      lisa@svslearn.com

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                                      • Jeremy Ross
                                        Jeremy Ross @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                                        Thank you for yesterday’s constructive feedback @Will-Terry and @Jake-Parker, very insightful!

                                        https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
                                        https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
                                        https://twitter.com/jeremyrayross
                                        https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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                                        • Doodleworx
                                          Doodleworx last edited by

                                          Thank you very much Jake and Will! I appreciated your critiques.

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                                          • Elliot
                                            Elliot last edited by

                                            Thanks so much guys! Pointing out the more 3D elements vs flat was something I couldn’t pinpoint but was struggling with. And concept/story has been my biggest struggle. But it’s good to know the other elements I have been focusing on (composition, value and rendering) are working.

                                            Watching everyone else’s critiques was helpful too.

                                            I definitely hope to see more of this style of critique if y’all have the time for them 😄

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