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    LIVE CRITIQUES: Inktober Submissions

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    • Norman Morana
      Norman Morana last edited by

      I'll throw my hat in the ring 🙂 This piece was a lot of fun to create and I enjoy it, but I also know there's room for improvement.

      Inktober_2020_12_LoRes.jpg

      Onwards,

      Norman

      normanmoranaillustration.com
      instagram.com/norman_morana/

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      • frankiiij
        frankiiij last edited by

        Can it be a piece that I have already created?

        Much love and God bless!

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        • Rachel Horne
          Rachel Horne last edited by

          It's hard to choose one, I'm torn between choosing a piece that I really liked or one that I think needed improving? I think I'll go for the latter...

          outpost.jpg

          www.rachel-horne.com
          instagram.com/rachel_horne_art

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          • Jeremy Ross
            Jeremy Ross @AustinShurtliff last edited by Jeremy Ross

            Hi @AustinShurtliff, thanks for the opportunity.

            I’m so undecided on which Inktober piece to submit, so I asked my wife and daughter to vote on their favorite, and here it is!

            I had so much fun inking this on my daughter’s dry erase board.

            9B03F109-D748-4BC7-90C1-7AC1E2BBBBD3.jpeg

            https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
            https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
            https://twitter.com/jeremyrayross
            https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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            • Oriana Fernandez
              Oriana Fernandez last edited by

              Hi @AustinShurtliff, here is my Primal + Inktober piece. Thanks for this opportunity!

              Day 11 Primal Disease.jpg

              https://www.instagram.com/oriana_fernandez_/
              My blog: https://orianafernandez.wordpress.com/2018/05/16/28-twilight-stories-or-the-flight-of-the-wryter-and-the-weaver/

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              • aska
                aska last edited by aska

                Hope 🙂
                inktober2020_hope.jpg

                Aska
                www.mugaska.com
                https://www.instagram.com/mugaska/
                https://www.etsy.com/uk/shop/mugaska

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                • Kyle Tobey
                  Kyle Tobey last edited by

                  Here’s mine for float. Untitled_Artwork.pdf
                  PDF is better quality in case it’s blurry! 5AAD6B13-987A-4BB4-91DE-7BBB064B2AE4.jpeg

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                  • djlambson
                    djlambson last edited by djlambson

                    Fancy Rodents

                    foliorodentsink.jpg

                    https://www.instagram.com/deborahlambson_art/
                    https://deborahlambson.com/folio

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                    • deborah Haagenson
                      deborah Haagenson last edited by

                      I am participating in inktober. I sure woul like some suggestions regarding hair, fur, human faces and hands. I am submitting my 'Wisp' drawing. I used a ball point pen for this, which I have found to be very useful when I need a light touch. I found inking the hand to be difficult.
                      Sketchtember_2020_2_72.jpg

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                      • miranda-hoover
                        miranda-hoover last edited by

                        Untitled_Artwork 11.jpg

                        Here is my Inktober image for prompts 5-8: blade, rodent, fancy, and teeth.
                        I'm looking forward to watching the live critique!

                        https://www.instagram.com/mirananemone

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                        • chrisaakins
                          chrisaakins last edited by

                          Here is the pic I would like critiqued.
                          BF4D169B-5778-48A2-BF7B-E012684CFA72.jpeg

                          Chris Akins
                          www.chrisakinsart.com
                          www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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                          • marek.halko
                            marek.halko last edited by marek.halko

                            Hi, trying my luck with this one...

                            20201024_105714.png

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                            • K.Flagg
                              K.Flagg last edited by

                              I had a hard time with this page. There is not as much contrast as most of my other pages so I would love a critique to figure out what I could have done better.

                              FTWR PG 23.jpg

                              K.Flagg

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                              • Maureen
                                Maureen SVS OG last edited by

                                My first Inktober and this was my entry for Sleep. Lots of room for improvement, I know, but would love some expert guidance.
                                SVS_Inktober-Day21-Sleep_MBF.jpg

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                                • Kim Rosenlof
                                  Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                                  I am excited to get feedback on my piece. Thanks so much for doing this! I really appreciate it. RadioInkedGirl.jpg

                                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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                                  • Coley
                                    Coley @marek.halko last edited by

                                    @marek-halko this is too awesome 😎

                                    https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                                    • marek.halko
                                      marek.halko @Coley last edited by

                                      @Coley haha, thank you😊!

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                                      • Georgios Christopoulos
                                        Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                                        I had a really hard time figuring which artwork I wanted to showcase..
                                        So I chose the one that I feel something is off, but can't really find what. Day 23,Rip!
                                        I still like how it came out though. 😊😊😊
                                        Thanks for the opportunity!!

                                        day23.jpg

                                        Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/g.chris.artwork/
                                        Deviantart : https://www.deviantart.com/g-chris

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                                        • Doodleworx
                                          Doodleworx last edited by

                                          6779EEE5-5966-47E6-9A8B-72B3CB390990.jpeg here’s mine, day 30-ominous. I’m way ahead this year.

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                                          • J
                                            JennyJones last edited by

                                            Inktober_Rodent_2020.jpg

                                            Here is my submission for the critique. Thanks for the opportunity.

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