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NEED ART FOR SVS YOUTUBE CRITS!

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  • Lee White
    Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by 1 Dec 2022, 19:58

    These are all great! I see so many great things going on in all of them. The good thing about this lecture series we are doing is we are looking at very specific things in each image. So an image may be working overall, and just need help in one or two specific areas.

    So please remember that if you see one of your images and we say it could use improvement in a specific area. : )

    We still have at least 7 more of these lectures, so please paste as many images in here as you like! I'm using a smattering of them in the lecture today. I really appreciate you guys putting yourself out there and being open to crits and feedback!

    SVS Faculty Instructor
    www.leewhiteillustration.com

    Asyas_illos Erichousel 2 Replies Last reply 21 Jan 2023, 20:02 Reply Quote 3
    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos @Lee White last edited by 1 Dec 2022, 20:24

      @Lee-White hi is there a link somewhere to attend or do we just hop over to YouTube at a certain time?

      Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
      www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
      https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

      LisaF 1 Reply Last reply 1 Dec 2022, 20:49 Reply Quote 0
      • LisaF
        LisaF SVS Team SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by 1 Dec 2022, 20:49

        @Asyas_illos Hi! You can find it here: https://youtu.be/nM_WqCTeZ4o 😁

        Director of Sunshine and Rainbows
        lisa@svslearn.com

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        • Lee White
          Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG @LisaF last edited by 2 Dec 2022, 17:37

          Thanks everyone! Keep posting to this thread if you want to appear on future crits!

          SVS Faculty Instructor
          www.leewhiteillustration.com

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          • ArtistErin
            ArtistErin last edited by 3 Dec 2022, 17:43

            Yes please!!! Working on a re-draw of the classic "The Velveteen Rabbit" and trying to develop compositions that are dynamic without being too busy... I'd love a critique! Thank you so much 🙂

            Wheelbarrow and Boy Final.jpg

            Erin Richardson
            instagram.com/erinrichardsondesigns21
            www.erinrichardsondesigns.com

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            • Gabby Correia
              Gabby Correia last edited by 5 Dec 2022, 08:57

              This one was from my very first prompt I did for SVS "Dragonfly"
              dragonfly_web.jpg

              https://linktr.ee/gabby_correia

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              • Alexe53
                Alexe53 last edited by 5 Dec 2022, 11:09

                Darker Final (5).jpg

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                • J
                  JennyJones @Lee White last edited by 8 Dec 2022, 03:53

                  @Lee-White Here is one that I did of the poem “The Owl and the Pussy Cat”. 527ECFF8-70A0-4C43-99AF-DC04DF7992A5.jpeg

                  When I made it I was satisfied and thought it would be a good portfolio piece. But now it seems like something is off. Help?

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                  • J
                    JennyJones last edited by 8 Dec 2022, 04:12

                    Here is a piece I did using a collage technique. I drew some, photographed some physical items and imported them, and also used some digital layering tricks. My take on the three little pigs.

                    BF4C0916-BE38-4919-8B74-D5894F455256.jpeg

                    Thanks for offering the opportunity for scrutiny. I love the style of artists like Melissa Sweet and Emily Gravitt with their collage looking pieces. I am trying to get a similar look to my work.

                    Kim Rosenlof 1 Reply Last reply 8 Dec 2022, 05:03 Reply Quote 5
                    • Kim Rosenlof
                      Kim Rosenlof @JennyJones last edited by 8 Dec 2022, 05:03

                      @JennyJones I really like this. Nice job with the collage. The expressions on the pigs are great.

                      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

                      J 1 Reply Last reply 9 Dec 2022, 00:28 Reply Quote 0
                      • von_Nimmermehr
                        von_Nimmermehr last edited by von_Nimmermehr 8 Dec 2022, 19:55 8 Dec 2022, 19:49

                        i don't know if i'm to late but i will leave this here.

                        Julia_Nowak_fix_art.png

                        Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

                        Heather Boyd 1 Reply Last reply 8 Dec 2022, 20:27 Reply Quote 5
                        • Heather Boyd
                          Heather Boyd @von_Nimmermehr last edited by 8 Dec 2022, 20:27

                          @von_Nimmermehr This is so wonderful! Concept with ocean waves in the tree. Wow wow! I like how you think. 🙂

                          Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
                          Website: https://heatherboydillustration.ca
                          Shop: https://www.inprnt.com/search/products?q=HeatherBoydIllustration
                          Ko-Fi: https://ko-fi.com/heatherboydillustration

                          Be blessed,

                          von_Nimmermehr 1 Reply Last reply 10 Dec 2022, 09:54 Reply Quote 1
                          • J
                            JennyJones @Kim Rosenlof last edited by 9 Dec 2022, 00:28

                            @Kim-Rosenlof , thanks. It was a new way to do things for me. It was a first and it took forever. But I learned a lot. Next time will be a little bit quicker…I hope.

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                            • von_Nimmermehr
                              von_Nimmermehr @Heather Boyd last edited by 10 Dec 2022, 09:54

                              @Heather-Boyd Thank you so much 🙂

                              Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
                              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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                              • KatrinaF
                                KatrinaF @Lee White last edited by 14 Dec 2022, 22:01

                                @Lee-White
                                Hey Lee! Katrina here. I'd love to get some feed back on this piece. Thx

                                Capture.JPG

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                                • Maureen*Henry*Artist
                                  Maureen*Henry*Artist @Lee White last edited by 15 Dec 2022, 03:07

                                  @Lee-White D13F879B-7CEB-4A97-98D0-52CB3C28254E.jpeg 9BAEF52A-3BD2-4A23-9948-A9AC21F41456.jpeg

                                  would love a critique

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                                  • kayleenartlover
                                    kayleenartlover @Lee White last edited by 31 Dec 2022, 03:11

                                    @Lee-White Kayleen_Sokol_Jan_2022.jpg
                                    I am planning on redrawing this piece since it is nearly a year old. I would love to get a critique on it before I recreate it.

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                                    • brettb_draws
                                      brettb_draws last edited by 3 Jan 2023, 09:25

                                      @Lee-White @Jake-Parker @Will-Terry
                                      I'd love to get your feedback on this one that I did earlier in the year! I was really happy with the concept and rendering but feel that the storytelling, and lighting could have been improved. I believe this was for the tiger prompt.

                                      679b32c8-3828-4172-a686-899ad808a918-image.png

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                                      • Lee White
                                        Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by 19 Jan 2023, 17:25

                                        We are doing a new episode of How to fix Your Art today so I wanted to bump this thread up! Keep submitting as we are going through all of these to find the ones to use for each episode. : )

                                        SVS Faculty Instructor
                                        www.leewhiteillustration.com

                                        Mia Clarke 1 Reply Last reply 19 Jan 2023, 17:43 Reply Quote 0
                                        • Mia Clarke
                                          Mia Clarke @Lee White last edited by 19 Jan 2023, 17:43

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