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    LIVE CRITIQUES: Inktober Submissions

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    • AustinShurtliff
      AustinShurtliff SVS Team last edited by AustinShurtliff

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      On Thursday October 29th SVSLearn is going to be holding our next Critique Jump Session. All current subscribers are invited to submit one piece they created for Inktober this year for a chance to receive critique from one of our instructors. Please post your chosen piece on this thread by October 24th for a chance to be considered.

      Can't wait to see what you all submit!

      Austin Shurtliff
      austin@svslearn.com

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      • VeronicaMui
        VeronicaMui @AustinShurtliff last edited by

        @AustinShurtliff Question - if I have a 30 day membership trial right now can I participate?

        WEB: Www.veronicamui.com

        IG: https://www.instagram.com/Veronica.mui

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        • AustinShurtliff
          AustinShurtliff SVS Team @VeronicaMui last edited by

          @VeronicaMui yes, as long as the trial doesn't expire before the 29th.

          Austin Shurtliff
          austin@svslearn.com

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          • Norman Morana
            Norman Morana last edited by

            I'll throw my hat in the ring 🙂 This piece was a lot of fun to create and I enjoy it, but I also know there's room for improvement.

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            Onwards,

            Norman

            normanmoranaillustration.com
            instagram.com/norman_morana/

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            • frankiiij
              frankiiij last edited by

              Can it be a piece that I have already created?

              Much love and God bless!

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              • Rachel Horne
                Rachel Horne last edited by

                It's hard to choose one, I'm torn between choosing a piece that I really liked or one that I think needed improving? I think I'll go for the latter...

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                www.rachel-horne.com
                instagram.com/rachel_horne_art

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                • Jeremy Ross
                  Jeremy Ross @AustinShurtliff last edited by Jeremy Ross

                  Hi @AustinShurtliff, thanks for the opportunity.

                  I’m so undecided on which Inktober piece to submit, so I asked my wife and daughter to vote on their favorite, and here it is!

                  I had so much fun inking this on my daughter’s dry erase board.

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                  https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
                  https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
                  https://twitter.com/jeremyrayross
                  https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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                  • Oriana Fernandez
                    Oriana Fernandez last edited by

                    Hi @AustinShurtliff, here is my Primal + Inktober piece. Thanks for this opportunity!

                    Day 11 Primal Disease.jpg

                    https://www.instagram.com/oriana_fernandez_/
                    My blog: https://orianafernandez.wordpress.com/2018/05/16/28-twilight-stories-or-the-flight-of-the-wryter-and-the-weaver/

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                    • aska
                      aska last edited by aska

                      Hope 🙂
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                      Aska
                      www.mugaska.com
                      https://www.instagram.com/mugaska/
                      https://www.etsy.com/uk/shop/mugaska

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                      • Kyle Tobey
                        Kyle Tobey last edited by

                        Here’s mine for float. Untitled_Artwork.pdf
                        PDF is better quality in case it’s blurry! 5AAD6B13-987A-4BB4-91DE-7BBB064B2AE4.jpeg

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                        • djlambson
                          djlambson last edited by djlambson

                          Fancy Rodents

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                          https://www.instagram.com/deborahlambson_art/
                          https://deborahlambson.com/folio

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                          • deborah Haagenson
                            deborah Haagenson last edited by

                            I am participating in inktober. I sure woul like some suggestions regarding hair, fur, human faces and hands. I am submitting my 'Wisp' drawing. I used a ball point pen for this, which I have found to be very useful when I need a light touch. I found inking the hand to be difficult.
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                            • miranda-hoover
                              miranda-hoover last edited by

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                              Here is my Inktober image for prompts 5-8: blade, rodent, fancy, and teeth.
                              I'm looking forward to watching the live critique!

                              https://www.instagram.com/mirananemone

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                              • chrisaakins
                                chrisaakins last edited by

                                Here is the pic I would like critiqued.
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                                Chris Akins
                                www.chrisakinsart.com
                                www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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                                • marek.halko
                                  marek.halko last edited by marek.halko

                                  Hi, trying my luck with this one...

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                                  • K.Flagg
                                    K.Flagg last edited by

                                    I had a hard time with this page. There is not as much contrast as most of my other pages so I would love a critique to figure out what I could have done better.

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                                    K.Flagg

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                                    • Maureen
                                      Maureen SVS OG last edited by

                                      My first Inktober and this was my entry for Sleep. Lots of room for improvement, I know, but would love some expert guidance.
                                      SVS_Inktober-Day21-Sleep_MBF.jpg

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                                      • Kim Rosenlof
                                        Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                                        I am excited to get feedback on my piece. Thanks so much for doing this! I really appreciate it. RadioInkedGirl.jpg

                                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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                                        • Coley
                                          Coley @marek.halko last edited by

                                          @marek-halko this is too awesome 😎

                                          https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                                          • marek.halko
                                            marek.halko @Coley last edited by

                                            @Coley haha, thank you😊!

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