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    • Rob Smith

      Winter Love
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      Thrace

      @Rob-Smith I remember this from before and I just think the emotions are so sweet! I think if it were mine I would darken the sky a bit especially at the top, but wait and see what others say. Very nicely done!!

    • Rob Smith

      Catching Snow Watercolor
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      @Bobby-Aquitania Thanks for the suggestion!

    • Naroth Kean

      After the storm
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      @Leontine @Lee-White 🙂 Thanks a lot guys! much appreciate.

    • bharris

      A little late for Fall!
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      smoke

      lovely color palet! 🙂 i realy like it, very cute paintingstyle also!! great illustration!! 😉 keep it up!! 🙂

    • Leontine

      Hedgehogs Christmas surprise update.
      hedgehog illustration christmas photoshop critique • • Leontine

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      Nancy Gormezano

      lovely update AND I just noticed the elfy slippers on hedgehog. FUN!

    • Dan Tavis

      A Tribute to Marc Brown ( Creator of the Arthur books and TV show)
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      Rob Smith

      My kids grew up watching Arthur. Wow, that just dated me! LOL. Great image @Dan-Tavis. Thanks for sharing.

    • T

      My first book cover
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      T

      so nice of you, Thank you so much!
      you're right i should have turned the candle down.. but Ill keep all your comments in mind for next time.
      made my day:)

    • audrey dowling

      Illustration for critique please
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      Lee Holland

      Really nice audrey well done. you painted it really well.

    • Dan Tavis

      Enjoying Fall watercolor painting
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      Charlie Eve Ryan

      loving the details in the trees and textures, nicely done!

    • Naroth Kean

      Holiday Card
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      @bharris Thank you! I'm glad you see that!!!
      @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen no problem at all and I love the course.

    • Jiří Kůs

      Character design - Rooster rider
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      @mattramsey said:
      I felt too the edge is a bit too hard, tried to make it softer in the second variant. And the rimlight comes also in the second image. The first one is daylight so I thought it would look to forced to add rim light.

      @gimmehummus I am going more for color variations and different times of the day.

      Is it better with or without shadows? isnt the chicken too dark?cockRider_canyon_river_800nos.jpg

      cockRider_canyon_river_800s.jpg

      UPDATE: Ups I deleted also chadow under the character... That was not supposed to happen 😃

    • Leontine

      Entry for Tuesdays critique
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      @smoke Thank you! Yes, there's still a lot of work on this one!

    • Charlie Eve Ryan

      Poe Cover Late Crits Welcome Revised x3
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      @gimmehummus Oh nice! Good eye, that is pretty sweet looking!

    • Thrace

      Christmas collaboration with Naroth Kean!
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      Thrace

      @Rich-Green its the headlight on the train. Thanks for your comments!

    • Rob Smith

      Snow Fall Watercolor Painting Critique
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      Naroth Kean

      now that is very lovely!

    • Camila Picheco

      Book Illustrations critique
      childrens book watercolor • • Camila Picheco

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      Naroth Kean

      I think your watercolor is lovely! I like your composition as well however there is something about the first image does not have the quality you have done to the other 3. I think it's the value differences. Anyway I really like your watercolor paintings!

    • Naroth Kean

      Book cover design
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      Naroth Kean

      Thank you so much everyone! really appreciate all the comment tips and help!
      @Thrace-Shirley-Mears, that is a good idea! Thank you
      @Charlie-Eve-Ryan, I think you are right, those jellyfish are just part of the interesting decorative stuffs haha. I should really focus on the two main characters. Thank you!
      @Leontine Thank you for your kind words!
      @bharris Thank you so much!
      @Dulice I love water scene and thank you!

    • johntatulliart

      Past work up for comments/critiques!
      illustration johntatulliart character creation conceptart • • johntatulliart

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      Leontine

      @johntatulliart nice concept, I agree with @Jonathon-B. the background is a bit distracting. You can push up the contrast on the rabbit as well. that will help. Fun piece!

    • BWoodford

      Traditional Piece Critique
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      BWoodford

      I'll go watch some of Proko's videos! Thank you for the suggestions!

    • mattramsey

      Contest entry crits needed--time sensitive
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      Rob Smith

      I too prefer the daylit version. Neat character.